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If I were President
Posted on February 16th, 2007 at 11:22 am by missionstudents and

 

 

 

 

One of the things I would give money to schools. So that more teachers can come and teach kid And so that teachers get better pay. The other thing is so they can go on field trips and learn things that teachers can’t teach them. And that is why I think that we should give more money to schools.

 

 

Another thing I do is give homeless people homes. The things about that are so they can get cleaned up and get a job. They can have a couple of weeks to get together too. And to keep them safe from other people that think other things about them. That is another thing I would do.

 

 

I would rebuild the White House. I would do that so in is sturdier. The other thing is so it can last longer. And so other people in the future can see it. That is why I would do that.

 

 

The last thing is that I would make school hours shorter. The hours would be 9:00 p.m. to 1:00 p.m. But I give harder work to do. The thing about that is that they can spend more time with family. And that is what I think I would do.

 

 

That is all the important things I would do if I was president of the United States of America.

 

 

 



Comments so far:

Link Here | February 17, 2007,

Wow! You did a great job! You have good topic sentences, excellent support, and concluding sentences. Your ideas are wonderful and you explained yourself well. This is awesome! I would vote for you!
Mrs. Nierlich

  missionstudents |


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